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Devils kiss
Contributed by
Sturgezulu
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Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:14:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Her devils kiss
was formed from hell
i never knew
nor i could tell
that behind those eyes
laid a curse
to infect my world
with no reverse
for she plundered my heart
then stole my soul
bled me to dry
left me to know
of what a fool
i could be
love was blind
i could not see
now full of regret
tears down her face
returning again
for my embrace
now this to me
seems to be
a hearts revenge
i grant to thee
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Sturgezulu
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2006-11-27 22:14:40]
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Re: Devils kiss
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by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:35:17 PM AEST
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| What a vicious poem! It very well portrays the heart's sickening satisfaction of revenge towards that which has hurt us. If this is a personal account, blessings to you and I hope it is not so hard now. But thank you for sharing such a dark poem...:) |
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Re: Devils kiss
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by Sturgezulu on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:47:43 PM AEST
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"It very well portrays the heart's sickening satisfaction of revenge towards that which has hurt us."
Hey thanks,thats it in a nutshell :).yeah its funny how you do yearn to revenge,but as much as id like too ..i couldnt be cruel :).Tho im not getting her a christmas present this year lol ! |
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