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Unttled
Contributed by
blindchoice
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Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 07:29:09 PM in AEST
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you helped me sing through my tears
and danced with me in the rain for two years
so now ill leave all my hopes and dreams
if youll only wait for me
becasue my heart is about to explode
and if you dont we'll never know
what we could have been
and what lies under our skin
these past two years have been the best of my life
up until the point i had to say goodbye
so tonight lets pretend ill say i love you
because truly i still do
remember what we were
and dont think of me when you kiss her
becasue i know i still think of you
and thats something i hoped i'd never do
i see your eyes in his
and yours are what i miss
why cant i forget you?
thats the only thing i cant do
these past two years have been the best of my life
up until the point i had to say goodbye
so tonight lets pretend ill say i love you
because truly i still do
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Re: Unttled
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 10:45:41 AM AEST
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I am a song writer myself.
Were I you I would use a title
like ...
A Love in the Rain
Praying for Rain
or I might use Rain with a double
meaning since it sounds the same
as Reign
Perhaps .... Our Rain
or... The Rain of Our Love ... Our Rain of Love
I hope these ideas help... Love the song lyrics
Truly , Doug |
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Re: Unttled
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by Nothingness on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:02:01 PM AEST
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| I really like this song and well i can relate wrote somehting simmilar and I would go with "Still in Love with you" |
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