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What's left of an old fire
Contributed by
SageofHalo123330
on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 11:56:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I was so close
To having the love of my dream.
Then it disappeared,
Like a single tear in a stream.
I was dancing on the clouds
Dancing with you, feeling the soft skin
Now I’m left all alone
Wondering what could have been.
I looked inside myself
And I found the one last ember
Left from times past
From that emotion I can hardly remember.
I hoped that that one ember
Could be coaxed into a flame
With you at the billows
The fire that appeared would be yours to claim.
That one last ember though
Hasn’t quite faded away.
Its still locked in my heart
Until you are ready, there it will stay.
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SageofHalo123330
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2006-11-26 23:56:29]
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Re: What's left of an old fire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 12:42:41 AM AEST
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"I was so close
To having the love of my dream.
Then it disappeared,
Like a single tear in a stream."
don't cry! you are wating for her, she has got to realize this sooner or later. hopefully tomorrow will hold pleasant surprises!
she will realize before that ember burns out or it will be her loss.
each poem of yours gets better and better tim, just shows that your emotion for her gets stronger and stronger every day.
still think your rhyming skills are amazing, just like this poem...amazing! |
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Re: What's left of an old fire
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 12:52:01 AM AEST
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Incredible emotion comes forth lovely write.
Michelle |
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