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Gone Away...
Contributed by
Saloni
on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:02:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I was alone that night
I stood on that spot
In the rain
In the dark
In the blackness
And hopeless
I looked up
The rain splashing on my face
Could not tell the weeping
Mixing tears
In the cold
Shivering
With a fear
You’re gone…
I cried that night
As the break-up
Im empty
So lonely
I wish u’d call me
Missing you...
You’re gone...
but not forgotten...
Copyright ©
Saloni
... [
2006-11-26 16:02:36]
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Re: Gone Away...
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 12:50:06 AM AEST
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I love a poem that stirs something within me and this has done just that. I felt it each word.
Michelle |
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Re: Gone Away...
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by ruthie1983 on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 01:01:34 PM AEST
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| yea, i have to agree once someone is part of ur life and u care for them, u will never forget them but u just have to move on. U expressed urself in this poem and i do believe it gets better with time. |
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Re: Gone Away...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 07:11:52 PM AEST
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Dearest Saloni~
I felt your sadness and it pains my heart. I'm so sorry this happened to you my friend.
I wish away your lonely nights & days dearest Saloni~ May you find peace within your ailing heart. May sorrow be replaced with love, joy & happiness my dear friend.
Big *heartfelt hugs* for you,
sue m |
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Re: Gone Away...
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by shaba_11 on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:58:59 AM AEST
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| Wagwan Saloni? nice write. |
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Re: Gone Away...
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by lost_in_the_darkness09 on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 04:42:40 PM AEST
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awww, i am really sorry for what you went through, and i just wanna let you know that im here for you, i have gone through many hard things, but nothing is harder than losing a loved one....good luck in life, and feel better
{Ra!||} |
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