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Lake (Haiku)
Contributed by
ramfire
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Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 02:32:39 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Morning is at hand.
Cold lake waits the rising sun.
A lonesome stillness.
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ramfire
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2006-11-26 14:32:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lake (Haiku)
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 02:35:57 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful and simple. The power of the haiku. I love this. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Lake (Haiku)
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 09:17:29 AM AEST (User
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In my mind I saw the lake with
that cold morning steam that
sometimes rises off of water.
You invoked a vivid image which
I would say is a sign of a very good
haiku. Great writing . Truly , Doug
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