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weak
Contributed by
xforever_faking_a_smile3x
on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 01:14:33 PM in AEST
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selfstruggles
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how can you be so strong
act like nothing is ever wrong
oh how i wish I was like you
you always know what to do
me on the other hand, i am weak
so broken and fragile, scared to speak
i cant deal with this..i hate it
i need to get out…its time to quit
quit this world, escape all this pain
what could i ever possibly gain
i cant watch my best friend dying
and the three others i love, constantly crying
why cant i take their pain away
i dont know what to do or what to say
i want to be better for all of you
but i really don’t think that’s something i can do
this depression is getting the best of me
a burden and a pain is all i’ll ever be
i’m at my breaking point, i’m falling apart
all my emotions are locked in my heart
i wont let them out anymore, its too much to bare
let it rip me apart, i don’t even care
all that matters is that they are okay
its not like i impact anyones day
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Re: weak
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by Saloni on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:06:54 PM AEST
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very touching poem.. its all about destiny.. don't give up..
keep strong
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Re: weak
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by Packatack on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 04:25:59 AM AEST
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Wow, i like your poem...i feel like that sometimes and i hate it
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Re: weak
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:15:39 AM AEST
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im sorry for your pain, but......if your friends' wellbeing is that important to you, don't u think yours is to them too? would you like it if they decided to shut themselves out completely and put up a fake smile or would you rather know whats going on so you could make it better.....? anyway.
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