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Choose to Bleed
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 11:21:09 PM in AEST
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How do I give you to understand~
that which I know, but can't better explain
How do I give you to make your own~
wisdom which through experience is gained...
And if this is simply not possible~
then how am I to give that which you need
To realize what it is you forsake~
everytime you instead choose to bleed...
How does your strength give itself over~
to that which is so unworthy of it
How does your mind accept being chained~
to that which its freedom must be forfeit...
And if in this you've simply no choice~
then how can the choice still be allowed yours
To continue what it is you would do~
if not denied is the right to close your own door...
Copyright ©
MisfitMe
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2006-11-25 23:21:09]
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Re: Choose to Bleed
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 11:32:47 PM AEST
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A touching write.I dont fully understand the cutting stuff it is so sad to me.
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Re: Choose to Bleed
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by EddieDean on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:18:44 PM AEST
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A powerful and sad write. I can sense the sadness, the lonelieness in this poem. We've all been there, so lost and confused in life. And we all choose our way to deal, and to cut yourself, well, I don't completely get it.
This is a truly sad write, but a very powerful one at that.
Mike |
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Re: Choose to Bleed
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:57:00 PM AEST
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I'll just say this Kerry....because this piece is so deep...it is sad that one must cause themselves pain, to releave pain. Reminds me of some lines from the tune Hurt....Trent Reznor's tune (Johnny Cash also recorded it before he passed)
"I hurt myself today
To see if I still feel
I focus on the pain
The only thing that's real"
Makes me cry.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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