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Dad
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
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Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 09:24:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I am so angry at my dad.
My dad was a bad dad,
I must add he left me and I am sad and mad.
My dad left me and chad my brother.
WE both were unclad .
My dad did not want us.
He claim us dead.
I ran a ad and hoping to let others know they are not alone.
Sometimes I am glad that my dad was bad.
but still it get me sad and mad at the same time.
I am always sad most of the time knowing he didnt want me.
Mad sad and unclad .
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Re: Dad
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by ClancyExistential on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 09:48:12 PM AEST
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the best way to get over an abusive parent is writing, believe me I know.
I relate so well with sometimes I'm glad my dad was bad, I say my father taught me everything NOT to do, and for that we can thank them.....
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Re: Dad
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by trini on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 03:35:23 PM AEST
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this is good.
your becoming a better writer. i dont know if you remember me, but i remember you. the rhyming was a little too much, but it was still enjoyable. keep up the good work
stay strong
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Re: Dad
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by simsalabim on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 11:07:28 PM AEST
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it's not your fault. don't feel so small...
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