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RIVER OF BLOOD
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 07:19:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My heart is beating faster
with every strangled breath I take
blood is all around me
bathing in this crimson lake
A pool of all the lies
makes me hear their screams
drowning in what's left behind
drink in the scarlet sea
eyes are blind and bleeding
staring at the broken sky
my own hell lies before me
and all I can do is cry.
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2006-11-24 19:19:21]
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Re: RIVER OF BLOOD
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 09:57:12 AM AEST
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so sad, yet darkly beautiful. i have a thing for dark poetry...and this one is amazing.
i love it...truly, abso-freaking-lutely amazing.
- Bethani - |
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Re: RIVER OF BLOOD
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by Nothingness on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 09:54:08 AM AEST
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Sweetie...rae..Beatiful write again...when i seen the title i was intrested to read and i seen who it was by and my heart stopped...i have been unable to pm a real pain trying to fix it but check your journal hun i never forgot you...never for oneday havei not thought of you i kept hoping you would fine my message in your journal..really worried hun hope you are managing...but not getting much console from your write...waiting and worrying
~Savanna~ |
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