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Nip The Evil Intents
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:28:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Oh Friend! To avoid shameful disgrace,
And earn favours in the Mighty Court,
Nip off the evil intents in the bud,
Lest they should assume the shape of words,
Which might take up the form of actions,
Actions become the character whole,
And the character bears instant catastrophe,
Bitter, painful and certainly tormenting.
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
... [
2006-11-24 17:28:55]
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Re: Nip The Evil Intents
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:52:08 PM AEST
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What wisdom these words speak.
good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Nip The Evil Intents
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 07:05:50 PM AEST
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Short and right to the point yet sound in its message.
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Re: Nip The Evil Intents
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by ClancyExistential on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 07:06:55 PM AEST
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I love how you blend such simplistic writing with deep meaning.
That is something I do try and work on.
The last three lines of your poem bear with me a meaning worth a thousand words.
Right on! I'm ClancyExistential, & I hope to hear more from you..... |
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Re: Nip The Evil Intents
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 12:22:07 PM AEST
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So much spoken in so few words. Wise words from a wise man.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Nip The Evil Intents
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by scrivonel on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 10:26:16 AM AEST
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Good poem.
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