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dance again
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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dancing atop a crystal ball
my tears fall burning holes in the glass
until i fall in
still dancing on the way down
till i hit bottom
bruises left on my heart
blood stains left on my dreams
forever gone is my soul
im dead to the world
i died on the way down
then stood up
and danced again
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Re: dance again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 09:51:45 AM AEST (User
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this makes me smile! the whole thing is all the pain...and then your last line...gives hope and inspiration. i love it!!! you're a truly amazing writer. i don't know what else to say, but this is one of the greatest poems i've read in awhile.
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