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Vile Intentions(RapPoem)
Contributed by
InfamousKilljoy
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Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 02:49:28 PM in AEST
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I cannot / find the light inside
Deep within / where my thoughts confide
To say the things inside my head
Not saying enough is what I dread
Your pity means nothing to me
A clear sign / of your mental deficiency
Your intentions / tantalizing
And all in all / demoralizing
The truth is / that I want you to perish
Like what you did / to things I used to cherish
Will you drift to heaven / or fall to hell
I'm not sure I guess only time will tell
It doesn't matter / who pointed the finger
And despite your depart / you words will linger
The things you spoke / the hearts you broke
Remain here / while it is I that chokes
Your words / they're serrated like knives
Making incisions / into others lives
You speak / knowing the repercussions
Pounding my head / into a concussion
Karma states / what's done to me will return to you
Its about time / you looked from my point of view
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InfamousKilljoy
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2006-11-24 14:49:28]
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Re: Vile Intentions(RapPoem)
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by tearstained_soul on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 04:09:57 PM AEST
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the rhyme scheme is pretty much perfect and the 2ns to last verse is INGENIOUS! your an amazing writer so keep it up and rockin'
~a stranger~ |
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Re: Vile Intentions(RapPoem)
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by SilverMercury on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 07:21:21 PM AEST
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| Oh damn. I can relate to this in more ways than one. Loooooooove it. LOVE it. |
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