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Shane (for soap fans of The B & B)
Contributed by
visionarybee
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Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:28:31 AM in AEST
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"Shane"
(for the soap opera fans of The Bold & the Beautiful)
He's a troublesome boy
And he tends to annoy
Now there for some time
He had all kinds of designs
And his main attraction
Twas Forrester Fashions
And get his hands on their money
so Shane can grab so fast
his promised land of milk & honey
And then the tide makes a turn
Plenty life lessons Shane needs to learn
Hence cupid has struck & Shane is in love
& now he wants to be Phoebe's beau
Yet his tale may be one of woe
He hasn't the notion how to move slow
And his bad behavior isn't getting him ahead
But most probably land him in trouble instead
If he hopes to win her love in this game
so she'll be his soon & take his name
He sure has change's need to be made.
Shane's not so good at being understood
This poor guy; I say with a sigh
It's just to bad; his stories so sad
He could have freely, willingly given his help
and not just been thinking of himself
If he hadn't got himself all up in a fetter
Things would a turned out a whole lot better
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visionarybee
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2006-11-24 05:28:31]
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Re: Shane (for soap fans of The B & B)
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 01:23:34 PM AEST
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lol
yea I liked this and I think Shane is a sper creep.
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Re: Shane (for soap fans of The B & B)
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by SoUR_GuRL67 on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 08:36:50 AM AEST
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Don't watch a lot of soaps myself
But, nicley written my friend.
And hey, your new to this poetry thing so no need to feel stupid, your doing quite well. Just remember poetry is anything you want it to be,it's just your thoughts, your feelings on paper so there are no rules despite what anyone may say!
Huggs and blessings
K |
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