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Not Good Enough
Contributed by
tynx
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Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My childhood tears never dry here,
Even with your hugs.
Your kiss can’t ever heal this wound.
There’s a pain in my chest,
A tear in my heart that festers and burns.
You all whisper your expectations,
Nasty little somethings that contradict my dreams.
Pull me here, twist me there,
Create the antithesis of me.
Trap me here, pin me down,
Just tell me what to do.
The child inside weeps, yet humbly I obey.
Empty hugs do not console, your kiss infects the wound.
Pat my head and then send me out to fail.
You just don’t know who I really am.
You just don’t care who I really am.
Copyright ©
tynx
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2006-11-23 23:43:31]
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Re: Not Good Enough
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by PoeticHybrid on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:46:53 PM AEST
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A very good first poem to the site. Hope to see more of your work up here. My favorite lines are:
"You all whisper your expectations,
Nasty little somethings that contradict my dreams."
I think we all can relate to that. |
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Re: Not Good Enough
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by Mila on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 02:22:51 AM AEST
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| This is real deep and yeah i think most of us can relate to it. |
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Re: Not Good Enough
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:36:42 AM AEST
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very deep write.. i like the expression in this and i agree with the above statement that "we all can relate to this at some point" great job
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