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Hardest to Receive

Contributed by brian3435 on Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Is it what i see it as, or is it what my mind can only imagine. A picture painted on the mind's closed eyes. I feel I'm obliged to tell one this feeling. Only because my mind can't hold it captive any longer. So the story begins...When I lose my train of thought, it's all because of her. Because when somebody tells me to focus on what is important, I tell them that I am. It's that way she plays so hard to get. It's like some kind of game played on my heart, but my heart can't turn away. And she may think I'm crazy, and she may think I'm in a little over my head, but I'll tell you one thing. I'm not because ever since I first laid eyes on her my brain won't allow me to lose the mental image of her. I need her more than anything in my life. It's hard to want something so bad and not be able to receive it whenever you need it the most. The only thing i can say is that what things need in order to survive is something that is the hardest to get. And what I need the most is accually the hardest to get. It's You.

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Re: Hardest to Receive (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackDeath on Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:27:41 PM AEST
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interesting.......

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