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One Day
Contributed by
SageofHalo123330
on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One day,
I want to shout your name.
From the rooftops,
My love for you I claim.
One day,
I want to hold you close.
Tell you my secret,
All the love in my heart, I expose.
One day,
If I can ever find the words,
I will let loose my love,
Flying like a flock of birds.
One day,
I will tell you how I feel.
Tell you the truth,
And make relations real.
One day,
If I wish with all my might,
You will be mine,
Into that sweet goodnight.
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SageofHalo123330
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2006-11-23 23:18:38]
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Re: One Day
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:22:04 PM AEST
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like i said..you're soo sweet....why doesnt she see??
you're rhymes arent forced and it packs a punch of emotion, great poem! :-)
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Re: One Day
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:38:21 AM AEST
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wow very powerful write.. why don't you write to this person to let them know how you feel if you can't tell them.. at least you will know one way or the other.. very expressive write.. good job
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Re: One Day
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by EddieDean on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 04:22:30 PM AEST
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Wow, very beautiful write. Its like you've looked into my heart and picked the words straight from my soul. Very good work, I feel this work, its like you read my mind.
Very very good!
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