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...Stolen Innocence...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 04:55:01 PM in AEST
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It was a day in early springtime
The afternoon sun shone bright
I was just a little girl back then
Playing beneath the sun’s light
I gazed at butterflies frolicking
Amidst the cool springtime sky
Their patterned wings reflected
Salient colors as they flew on by
As I played merrily in the meadow
Dad’s best friend strolled my way
He addressed me to come nearer
Telling me he’s got a game to play
He began to fondle my fragile body
In shock I congealed in complete fear
I stared dismally into his adult eyes
My emotions lead to bloodied tears
Like a beastly animal he penetrated
With each stroke he pushed deeper
Excruciating pain rendered me numb
Into unconsciousness I fell steeper
He whispered vaguely into my ear
His callous secret must never be told
With a shallow breath I closed my eyes
As I felt my battered body turn cold…
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 04:58:28 PM AEST
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| This is truly heartbreaking. Innocence taken in the most cruel way. Painful write , and so honestly done. I feel for your fiend, such a sad story. Sue x |
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by vron on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 05:42:38 PM AEST
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| oh dear. thats so sad. :[ |
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by BlackDeath on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 05:51:47 PM AEST
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| so sorry :( |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 06:06:01 PM AEST
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This story is much too common...I know. But, by taking it out of the shadows, we take some of the power away from these monsters!
THANK YOU!!!
Kerry Lynne
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by tin on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 08:04:38 PM AEST
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| the story your poem tells chills my blood, but the memories that it stirs boil it. i have relitives that lived this, and now the man(if he can be called a man) that's responsible is due for a parole hearing some time this month. i hope for the worlds sake that he stays locked up. but if society is betrayed by the "justice" system and he values his life then he'll never set foot anywhere near my family. |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by wizard on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 08:22:36 PM AEST
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this was a powerful read..it stirs many emotions in me, the greatest being anger... i'm not quite sure why things like this happen, but unfortunately it is much too common.. my heart goes out to all victims of such atrocities...
wiz |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:46:29 AM AEST
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wow very powerful and expressive piece.. im sorry to hear about your friend.. that is a horrible thing to go through and it scars you for life.. someone very close to me also went through this.. very well expressed in poetry.. great job
JENNI |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 12:21:46 PM AEST
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Sue, My goodness, this write gave me chills. I know too many young folks who have been through things like this, it is a tragedy. One must go through their whole lives, with this horrible memory. I feel anger and deep sadness when reading this. Thanks for writing with such brutal honesty, my friend.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 08:03:21 PM AEST
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You capture both the innocence and the theft most effectively thank you for your bravery and sharing this which breaks the spell of his secret. More than Innocence was violated. Trust, self-awareness, sacredness, happiness, joy, ecstacy to name a few are all victimized.
The pedophile who did that should in turn suffer the wish of a thousand deaths each more horrible and cruel for taking away someones experience no less for making a child feel pain and cry.
Please allow for projecting testicular cancer on his sorry butt while serving a lengthy prison term.
May the Goddess always flow from you. May your muse heal every inch and cell of your being. May you forever be young and glorious...
Sweet Sweetest Dreams
AJ |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 06:52:48 AM AEST
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| wonderfully wrote Sue,,people like that should be strung up by their balls..tell your friend god bless from me,,Eddy |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by Saloni on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 12:29:37 PM AEST
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| soo sad.. very imaginative emotional poem! brilliantly written! keep posting |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:57:13 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching but be blessed for writing this for your friend.
I agree this story iss too true on this planet.
It'ss up to each generation to stop it.
I was abused by an uncle and a tender age. Usually the abuser has been abused but that don't make it right!
It's very sad but again bless you for writing this.
luv, huggs, prayers for yoour friend,
emy |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 02:34:59 PM AEST
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Now I consider me a calm and nonviolent man, until I read something such as this, then I want just five minutes. That's all it takes. Five minutes for justice. And stolen innocence would never never happen again from the monster. Gripping and effective write, Sue.
wabl
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by Clarity_Rising on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:38:05 AM AEST
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Very tragic, unfortunately it
happens all the time. I wish the
culprit could read this poem to
see the pain and agony he had
caused on your friend. Excellent
write!
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 04:30:57 PM AEST
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Omg Sue this is so sad it brought tears to my eyes.You ok girl?
Sorry i haven't been around much lately had lots of issues but if you ever need to talk PM me ok.
love ya
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 09:45:04 PM AEST
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Oh, darling, as usual your work is heartwrenchingly beautiful. I do so hope that you are fine. You continue to be a fabulous writer. keep it up.
xXx
~kei |
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 11:42:37 PM AEST
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First, I commend you for your strength, it must have taken a lot to write this. And you wrote it well, it conveyed the emotions all too well, would that you didn't have to.
Take care, well written,
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Re: ...Stolen Innocence...
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 02:03:45 AM AEST
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By the title I guessed the content..and read it with attention..
I hate such paedofiles who are worst than beasts..heart wrenching experience of a girl..
A good write. venkat
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