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Capt. Quill
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 02:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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All those who believe~
wear their hearts on their sleeves
Or just find the world too harsh to bare...
Any class clowns~
or village idiots crowned
Having ever wondered what might be out there...
All you single mothers~
& darker skinned brothers
Who've never been allowed to be more...
Any actors in plays~
or closet bound gays
That would see for themselves distant shores...
All in the streets whoring~
loadies junk scoring
Ever so ready to stop getting screwed...
Any out on parole~
strangers or lost souls
I welcome to sign on as my crew...
I'm Captain Quill~
with a ship to be filled
She's my own true love, the Iva De Lady...
Never my tongue stilled~
or broken my will
And, invite aboard any not shady...
Do so many away turn~
my offer spurn
That I should now see more backs than faces...
I would like to learn~
why this bridge you'd burn
Why so many choose to fold, holding Aces...
Are your own lives so great~
or you doomed by fate
That on this adventure you'd simply pass...
Do on better you wait~
for, I pay going rates
Though, I've no wish to futher harass...
Completely stumped~
down from my barrel I jumped
And, sat down to watch the street lanterns be lit...
Had my head, I bumped~
my wits from dumped
More than ever missing my ol' crew of misfits...
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MisfitMe
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Re: Capt. Quill
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by wizard on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 02:45:06 PM AEST
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nice write! i loved it... arrgghhh!
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Re: Capt. Quill
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by blindchoice on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 02:53:55 PM AEST
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| wow nice write. i love it. |
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Re: Capt. Quill
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 05:12:49 PM AEST
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I have come to be a real fan of your writings dear Misfit~ Captivating and entertaining as always. You did an awesome job with this~
Keep up the fantastic work,
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Capt. Quill
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:39:59 PM AEST
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Sounds like sailing with a ship of fools LOL ...I'm coming aboard, sounds like my kinda ride.
You are a good person, Kerry. It seeps out in your writes.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Capt. Quill
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:09:16 PM AEST
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Upon review it feels you have channeled a past life that was ever in search of booty. Though somethings never change you handled well expressing the interface of Capt. rounding crew for there are voyages yet to be had spoils yet to be plundered...
Well Done
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Re: Capt. Quill
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 07:38:41 AM AEST
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Oh this is beautiful my friend i knew if i came to this end of your pages i would luck out and i did. Sign me on i'm ready 2 come abord and shiver me timbers me hardy . . .
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