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inevitable
Contributed by
tin
on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 12:59:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ending life left and right,
taking souls day or night,
sometimes in plain sight,
for the grim reaper is coming.
who knows how long till you'll be found,
maybe have time to travel the world around,
but if you listen close you'll hear the sound,
of his drummers drumming.
No way to know the month or year,
you may think you have nothing to fear,
but you can tell that he is near,
when your world starts crumbling.
Maybe he'll meet you in your sleep,
maybe push you down a hill that's steep,
but we all must count the eternal sheep,
for the grim reaper is coming.
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tin
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2006-11-23 00:59:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: inevitable
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:40:00 AM AEST (User
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You mention the "grim reaper" my oh my he sends chills down my spine. Sue thinks happy thoughts before she sleeps, lol. Fingers crossed, I hope "the grim reaper" never crosses my path.
You had me on the edge of my seat with this great, dark captivating write of yours. A job well done. Keep up the great work~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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