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You Will Never Know
Contributed by
TranceLover
on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 11:11:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My eyes want to see only you
My heart wants to love no one other than you
I want to be held only by you
My smile only appears because of you
But my tears only fall because I cant have you
If you only knew
I wonder what you would say
Maybe you'd say your eyes need to see me
Your heart can't help but love me
You arms only want to hold me
Maybe you'd say you love my smile
& maybe you'd wipe my tears away
Then, maybe you'd say "Now that I know, I've been dying to tell you, I need you so much because I love you"
Or maybe you'd say "I'm sorry, I just don't feel the same."
That is why you will never know
It's a 50/50 chance and I wont take that chance
If I hear you saying you don't feel the same it would break this crippled heart of mine
And trying to put the pieces back together would be too difficult for me to do
So instead I'll just hide my feelings and I'll love you from afar
But you will never know
You will never know
Just how much you mean to me
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TranceLover
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Re: You Will Never Know
(User Rating: 1 ) by sally-heart-jack on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:17:40 AM AEST (User
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This reminds me of a poem I wrote... That Sum 41 Song in Fifth Grade.... I understand this completely. [I think lol]
Then, maybe you'd say "Now that I know, I've been dying to tell you, I need you so much because I love you"
Or maybe you'd say "I'm sorry, I just don't feel the same."
If I hear you saying you don't feel the same it would break this crippled heart of mine
And trying to put the pieces back together would be too difficult for me to do
So instead I'll just hide my feelings and I'll love you from afar
I love the 'crippled' part, like your heart's already hurt, but not totally 'dead' yknow? well that's how I percieve it :-D
I've experience just this.... he'll never knjow I guess.... anyways, overall, this poem is both in a way happy and sad, bec. you're in love, but that is instantly crushed because they'll never find out, and that's like the worst feeling....
Continue to write..
you did good! ^_^
__Julia_ |
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