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Perfect
Contributed by
Sparkz16
on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 05:54:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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perfect what is perfect?
is perfect no mistakes?
does perfect alway have the right answers, never wrong?
is that perfect?
perfect says all the right things all at the perfect time.
or is perfect the perfect day, perfect time and place, perfect hair, perfect clothes,perfect flower in the perfect sky
why does everyone feel they have to be perfect?
perfect is you the way you are
perfect is what you imagine it to be perfect doesnt have to be following the crowd.
so be yourself because you are perfect in your own little ways..
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Sparkz16
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2006-11-22 17:54:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 06:01:06 PM AEST (User
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Perfect is your message here!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by Amicus on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 07:04:24 PM AEST (User
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It was nice...though i kept getting caught between sentences so you might wanna add commas to a poem like this. it was great though.
keep writing
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Re: Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by trackiller2006 on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:41:04 PM AEST (User
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I think that was one of your best!
Keep 'em coming Amanda!
trackiller2006
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Re: Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by SilverDagger on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 07:45:00 AM AEST (User
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Profound and sagacious! I love the way you've developed the theme! |
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