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Resistance Is Futile
Contributed by
secretwind
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Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 11:56:15 PM in AEST
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Sweetly her body
gyrates around me
it's so arousing
as I am trying my best
to pretend
I am uneffected,
she's talking and she's touching
and
I'm feeling something is coming
still I try my best
not to succumb to the bliss.
I am On fire
with a strange desire,
she's got what I need
and try not to let her know...
but ooh
when ever she is around
resistance is futile
I lose control.
I'm silently screaming
as she tells me
that she needs me
with such sweet charms
she is so hard to ignore,
I'm getting a feeling
she's concealing
something deep dark and revealing
then I suddenly remember
she's done this all before.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2006-11-21 23:56:15]
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Re: Resistance Is Futile
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by ToriVeigh on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 01:48:03 AM AEST
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| WOW!!!! I loved this. So descriptive, expressive and evocative - Great Write! |
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Re: Resistance Is Futile
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 01:46:49 PM AEST
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| Clever! with a nice twist at the ending! |
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Re: Resistance Is Futile
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by books_4gal on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 04:43:08 PM AEST
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Oh my, how well you've woven the words together to express the mystery of attraction, how one person can overwhelm our senses by their very presence. Very enjoyable read and I liked the ending.
Peace~ |
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Re: Resistance Is Futile
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 05:46:44 PM AEST
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Wow, this is great. You express yourself so well in this. I loved the ending, a real twist.
Well done and keep up the magnificent work~
big warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Resistance Is Futile
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:39:04 PM AEST
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Yea, that's how it goes at times.
good work dear friend.
big smiles,
emy |
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