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Surrendering Without You
Contributed by
Nothingness
on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 08:35:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A girl stands alone in the night
She is ready to loose her fight
To tired and lost to go anymore
Tired of watching all her tears pour
Tired of acting like she is so strong
Tired of wearing her mask for so long
What could cause this girl so much pain?
It all stared when her friend got on that plane
He promised her everything would be alright
That he would never really leave her sight
He would write her letters and call on the phone
That she would never have to be alone
Though she cried and begged him to stay
The next day he hugged her and flew away
They kept in contact helping each other through
But how bad she needed him, he never knew
He called her house to hear her crying
He told her to stay strong and keep on trying
The next day she waited as a plane came into sight
As people got off she knew something wasn’t right
Tears soaked their battle torn faces
They fell into families warm embraces
A man came up and handed her a note
As she read a lump grew in her throat
It was from the government saying sorry for the loss
Saying he was dead and here was his cross
Crying now she is ready to surrender
Because now she has no friend or defender
The sunsets and she takes a gun in her hand
She pulls the trigger and hopes it goes as planned
Sorrow hangs heavy but somewhere two friends stand
Smiling down at the world as they are hand in hand
Copyright ©
Nothingness
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2006-11-21 08:35:07]
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Re: Surrendering Without You
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 10:42:43 AM AEST
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| wow..powerfull and painfull.. that is a very sad story told with grace and true talent. thank you. *wipes tear from eye*... |
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Re: Surrendering Without You
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by spiritwind on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 02:13:50 PM AEST
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We each mourn in our own way. This is a good place to start, letting emtions out through poetry. Good write.
sorry for you loss and sadness
SW |
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Re: Surrendering Without You
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by lyddie on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:19:07 PM AEST
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| this is good ....but very sad |
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