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You Love Her Still
Contributed by
alison
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Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 09:51:20 PM in AEST
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You love her still,
I see it in your eyes,
The tone in your voice,
You love her still,
With me in your arms,
Her kiss is what you crave,
I stand here handing you my heart,
But your heart to her you gave,
You say you care for me,
But you turn when she calls,
I don’t know what to do,
So many sleepless nights,
I want to be with you,
She knows how you feel,
And plays that well,
Keeping you late on the line,
Keeping you up all the time,
She does not treat you right,
You love her still,
I would give you everything,
The sun and the moon if I could,
I love you for who and what you are,
I would stand at the airport for years,
Simply waiting to catch your tears,
But though you look at me,
You dream of her,
I don’t know what to do,
You love her still.
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alison
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Re: You Love Her Still
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by purplestary on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:05:00 PM AEST
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| wow...don't know what to say here..this is a brilliant write though...all i can say is you deserve better, if this is about you. if he cannot see the love you have for him...then he isn't worth it..as much as it might hurt, because it's obviouse you love him so much, sometimes "when you love someone, you gotta let em go.".... |
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Re: You Love Her Still
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by kaleidoscope on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:36:04 PM AEST
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| This makes me sad!! but no matter how hard you try you can not make someone love you as you do them...trust me i know...but when you give your heart fully to someone as "he" seems to have then it will not be taken back for a looooong time..when its true selfless love it hopes and is blind to the better that is out there but thats the way love is..i am sorry if this is about you...I know i said the other one was my fav but i have a new fav now cause i relate so well...good stuff as always thanks for sharing |
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Re: You Love Her Still
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by Benny14 on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 02:14:09 AM AEST
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| great write. we guys dont always know when we have it good. |
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Re: You Love Her Still
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by whiteleo1984 on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 05:02:30 AM AEST
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| brilliant... very well dun |
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Re: You Love Her Still
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 07:33:48 AM AEST
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I really feel the pure love / not returned in this piece... Probably not the thing I should be reading in my current mood.
As always, I love how you explain yourself and the imagry you create through examples.
It really hit the spot!
Nice write!
- Tim |
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