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as i fall
Contributed by
poky1502
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Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 08:56:56 PM in AEST
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oops
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and when it all comes falling down
i will stay underneath to be crushed by my assumptions.
youll stand on top while i bare the weight of false promises and shattered dreams.
when you breathe i see the air.
as chilling as your soul it freezes my last thought.
you were the one id die for.
proven right i bless my soul and stay true to my word.
my death my shrine
step off and find
the smirk doesnt match your broken heart.
you froze my tears, mocked my compassion,
and now spend your days lonely, numb, and dependent on yesterday.
i am no more
i was deserted.
taken for granted
i now vanish into distant memory.
you took everything knowing id give my last support to hold you high
now your on top while you watch me die
choking back the tears from your indifference.
goodbye
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2006-11-20 20:56:56]
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Re: as i fall
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by Alison on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 10:43:51 PM AEST
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| very moving but really sad. Good write |
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Re: as i fall
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by purplestary on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:00:26 PM AEST
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| very sad indeed... but it has no potential of being garbage....feel proud of this one.. it is brilliant and is nothing short of a masterpeice. nicely done. |
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