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PLUTO
Contributed by
onlyoneheart
on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:00:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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there is only one thing i know that there must be a way to go
yeah, I have never been in love
yeah ,I have never had those pretty stuff..
i convince my self that i get what i want but the truth I'm not
i'm just a man withnothin ,i only keep laughin..
tell me should i cry for help now ..? no i don't
i cry on my self ,with ma self
i laugh with you but beleive me i'm crying inside,,
and someday we will just collide..
i often try talking about me, but i'm actually seeking you to hear me,
it's not a poem this time ,it's nothing
and i don wonna know any thing
hiding behinde my smile is the one i used to be.. why the hell this happenning to me..
why even i should write this . when i beleive that no body cares.
gifting you with sympathy or a grace
so why this damn life really hurts most of time..?
hey Sir , Mrs would you through me a dime?
that you with that helping me not to commit a crime..
i say earth circle around me, is that's how i should be?
no howcome?? people say i''m not . so what??
have you ever controlled your happiness?
or you are just like me happyless??
i mean when you feel so sad ..could you just at once cheer your self up?
or you are just fed up..
nevermind forget it now i guess there is nothing left over for you and me..
let's just go away..setting our selves free
i consider me sitting at PLUTO , just hoping to forget your photo
huh!! I know there is no air..but somehow i still aware
yeah my heart still on fire , also my chest is now a blown tire/
like in earth lonlyness i'm grieving on my knees hoping to breathe
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onlyoneheart
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2006-11-20 18:00:19]
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Re: PLUTO
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by onlyoneheart on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:03:47 PM AEST
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| here was the poem i can never send to people i know... |
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Re: PLUTO
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by purplestary on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:22:53 PM AEST
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| such potential in this....if i could just get past the parts that don't make sense....i can almost get, and feel the idea though...and i think...it could be great....if you could just...um..clean it up a bit....it's a little messy......try...reviewing your writting before actually posting it...or better yet...get someone else to review it so they can help you edit it...maybe? |
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