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The Truth(Linkin Park style)
Contributed by
InfamousKilljoy
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Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I cannot / find the light inside
Deep within / where my thoughts confide
To say the things inside my head
Not saying enough is what I dread
Your pity means nothing to me
A clear sign / of your mental deficiency
Your intentions / tantalizing
And all in all / demoralizing
The truth is / that I want you to perish
Like what you did / to things I used to cherish
Will you drift to heaven / or fall to hell
I'm not sure I guess only time will tell
It doesn't matter / who pointed the finger
And despite your depart / you words will linger
The things you spoke / the hearts you broke
Remain here / while it is I that chokes
Your words / they're serrated like knives
Making incisions / into others lives
You speak / knowing the repercussions
Pounding my head / into a concussion
Karma states / what's done to me will return to you
Its about time / you looked from my point of view
Copyright ©
InfamousKilljoy
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2006-11-20 15:34:46]
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Re: The Truth(Linkin Park style)
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by wizard on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:37:34 PM AEST
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very nice, i like it a lot!
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Re: The Truth(Linkin Park style)
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 09:01:50 PM AEST
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This does remind me a lot of an LP song, you know. It has that sort of stacatto, sharp-edged realness about it. Unpolished.
The line breaks are also just right for them.
I like the 4th verse and last two lines best.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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