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So Close, So Far Away
Contributed by
ed
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Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's a rainy evening in your home town.
I'm leaving here with you on my mind.
You're just a few miles away from me
But I'm hundreds away from you.
I draw each breath likes it's my last,
Treasure it because you're breathing this air.
I look through the train window
And the rain beats down soaking everything in sight.
It reminds me of the tears drowning my soul
and I wonder who you're with tonight?
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ed
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2003-02-18 01:20:00]
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Re: So Close, So Far Away
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:24:05 AM AEST
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| i can feel your emotion here...hopefully you will see your love again |
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Re: So Close, So Far Away
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by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 06:43:21 AM AEST
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| beautiful...true spillage of the soul...keep writing xxx |
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Re: So Close, So Far Away
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by sunflower on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 08:05:25 AM AEST
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long distance love? perhaps?
this is sad, but sweetly painful, liked it |
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Re: So Close, So Far Away
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:11:13 PM AEST
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That's so pretty! Gave me some really great visual images. Great job!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: So Close, So Far Away
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by LJ on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:26:33 PM AEST
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| Your emotion is dripping all through this. Well done...and a note from experience...it will take time! |
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Re: So Close, So Far Away
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by EndEformEtrancE on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:25:08 AM AEST
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WOW you truly are amazing when it comes to imagery, this really catches on the heart.
Thanks a lot for this one.
Max |
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Re: So Close, So Far Away
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 12:23:45 PM AEST
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| Ed, unusual imagery, evocative. Good wrie. |
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