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the unforgiving
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
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Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:45:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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as i look through the glass all i see alas is your hurricane of pain and greif, your drive to strive for peace is to an end
it doesn't matter for more or less for your world is about to SHATTER, i will be there to watch you fail, then you'll all hail to me
you may show the compassion, but yet they criticize so i am in rage, the end is near i do not fear as i watch their lifes crumble with jeer
oh it stings, oh it hurts, but thy cannot be adhered to the brink of destruction
With darkness
~ The Raven
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2006-11-20 11:45:32]
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Re: the unforgiving
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 10:31:13 PM AEST
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We're in this hurricane of pain and self destruction together. screw the whole world!
Good write!
Despising the happiness we were never meant to have,
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Re: the unforgiving
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 07:45:24 AM AEST
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A nice poetic outburst. May you find a haven in the hurricane's eye.
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