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Darkness Falls
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:35:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Maybe baby
I'll see you later
we can walk and talk
and play the game,
but right now baby
confusions the master
stirring deep passions
of ill in my mind,
I got this feeling of depression
I see visions of disaster
something evil
sits and waits,
so I gotta go
but please don't follow
I must get
this shadow
to go away.
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secretwind
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2006-11-20 11:35:28]
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by ever1der on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:38:17 AM AEST
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| I really like the way one line leads right to the next. The shadow thing made me shiver.. |
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 06:35:26 PM AEST
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You have penned this very well. 1 in every 4 people suffer from depression and it's a deep and dark thing for one to deal with. I have been a sufferer for the past 6 years. Some days are better than others though. Your poem reminded me of a time where I had nearly given up and lost all hope, but I'm here today many thanks to my family and close friends I have managed to get this far.
Chin up my friend and may depression never get the best of you. Wishing you much brighter days ahead. Take care.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 04:15:17 AM AEST
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..day-to day thoughts.. down and in the doldrums-
I don't know what it is that ails ya.. but chances are, I've been there-
breathe deep my friend.. and hope that the next day will be better than the last.. (and NOT without any effort on your part)
Be well my friend..
though, you should want to be well - at the very least- ..good work-
All of my thoughts and prayers to you~
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