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right here waiting
Contributed by
myloveispure
on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 09:06:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i remember all of those late night talks,
and all of those late night walks,
I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.
so now i cant forget you,
in my heart you will always be,
every once in a while i pick up the phone to call you,
even though i know your phones disconnected and you wont answer,
but i hope for a miracle,to hear you on the other end,
but like i knew it would,
i hear nothing but an automated woman and the wind,
your gone but still...i am right here waiting.
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2006-11-20 09:06:11]
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Re: right here waiting
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by annoiosa on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 09:44:03 AM AEST
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| how sad.... this is a nice one too, though. |
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Re: right here waiting
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by Alison on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:36:58 AM AEST
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| very moving and sad....good write |
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Re: right here waiting
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by secretwind on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:41:15 AM AEST
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Deep emotonal torture flow
well done |
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Re: right here waiting
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by ever1der on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:48:20 AM AEST
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I was reading along and everything was rhyming..then the rhyme stopped and it went to freeverse..may I ask why?
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