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How
Contributed by
BlackDeath
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Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 11:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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How to show
This Feeling?
This Love?
Surrounded By The Hate Of The Others
Trying To Feel Only Your Love
Lost In Decisions And Missing You
Kept Apart From You
And theres Still A-Part Of You Here
How I wish you were here to hold
me and takeaway my troubles and my pain
But I feel kept in the Dark
Still Alone With My Misery...
Copyright ©
BlackDeath
... [
2006-11-19 23:24:43]
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Re: How
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:27:28 AM AEST
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| i know how you feel. This is really good it isnt crap! Good Job! |
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Re: How
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by wizard on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:22:50 PM AEST
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wow, that crap was great...lol...just kidding (about the crap, i mean)
this was a great read, my only humble suggestion would be to eliminate the capital letters dispersed throughout the poem... it slows down the flow of the read a bit... other than that, i loved it!
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