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Sin-tell-ating
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 08:51:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sinking beneath the waves of skin,
Organs all alligned with tin.
My wandering blood annoyed with my heart,
Restrict its flow, don't let it start.
All in all, I've lived this time,
A foolish fiend of fatal crime.
Blood on the wheel of my speeding car,
Gushing cuts of which I mar.
Drizzled tears across my plate,
Etching stone on my own slate,
The coming of the Northern Wind,
Rips me up and repairs me again.
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assassinatorgirl
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2006-11-19 20:51:27]
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Re: Sin-tell-ating
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by Faust on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 10:31:50 AM AEST
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The imagery in this poem is extremely well conveyed I only wish it was longer.
Eternally Punished,
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Re: Sin-tell-ating
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by secretwind on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:50:11 AM AEST
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| I like this off balance flow |
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Re: Sin-tell-ating
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by SaraSS on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 11:24:22 PM AEST
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| I like the meaning overall, but I only hope that you don't always write rhyming poems. It really restricts the inner meaning one can get from a piece of art like this. |
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Re: Sin-tell-ating
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by doughnutman73 on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 04:24:26 PM AEST
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i enjoyed the flow and balance
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