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nebulae
Contributed by
vikingbrokk
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Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 06:58:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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there is only her
she who resides at the center of all that is
in all of the universes, there is her
stars and planets turn to dust
nubulae spin out of control
gods are born
worshipped
forgotten
and there is her
to know her takes infinity
to love her takes faith
risk is easy
failure is not
to live in that place
the periphery of her
invites demons
who will destroy your soul
in the blink of a planetary lifespan
and yet
it is worth all
to spend immortality
for a taste
of her sweetest treasure
Copyright ©
vikingbrokk
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2006-11-19 18:58:11]
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Re: nebulae
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by shelby on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 10:03:39 PM AEST
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something about this sends the soul to fly.
delightful read.
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Re: nebulae
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by Benny14 on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:58:04 AM AEST
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| simple, but straight up truth. i like it. nice work. |
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Re: nebulae
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 02:14:31 AM AEST
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This leaves me utterly aching. It's quite beautiful and wonderfully conveyed... but it is, I think, the poet's moment within in that is so moving to me. It is terribly difficult to get longing/love on the page, I think ~ ah, but you've done well here.
Heavenly, this is.
~Snemmy
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Re: nebulae
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by NDean on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:55:53 AM AEST
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I like this poem. It seems to build then settle to a nice finish. Flows well.
Nathan
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