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Painfull Sweey Goodbye
Contributed by
crazy
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Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 09:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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innocence lost in a childish face
without knowing the reason for such a discrace
she grew up hating herself for everything
eating only to puke it back up
not eating to become skinnier
saddness and guilt for things she had no control over
yet her family is still torn by alchol and screams
her arms filled with scars of her pain
legs covered in blood as water flows over them
emotions bleeding out from the cuts
only release she has now
no one caring that she might disappear
she crys at night, for her heart hurts
for all those who suffer in the world
the animals who are killed, the people who fight wars,
people starving,family's being ripped apart
for her first true love
she knows all these things she can't be changed
by her alone yet she feels responsible
tears shed for her own life
growing up to fast & not living
trapped in a black vault of hatred for the world
lost in depression
thoughts race thrugh her mind
What would they say?
Would they remember her?
What would they remember of her?
would HE love her and regret not telling her HIS feeling for her?
crying while writing her last letter
black tears fall to the paper as it becomes red
her wrists bleed out while she swallows the pills, falling asleep
the letter is a Painfull Sweet Goodbye
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2006-11-19 09:51:03]
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Re: Painfull Sweey Goodbye
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by Saloni on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 03:33:10 PM AEST
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| i love this poem! very well written! woww.. u've wrote with some great expressions.. emotions.. they awsum! read some of my other poems.. they are similar to yours.. |
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Re: Painfull Sweey Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:21:40 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. I just hope that this isnt based on your life! |
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Re: Painfull Sweey Goodbye
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by romance_pyro on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 09:01:55 PM AEST
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| You never have to say goodbye. You just have to know when to express it around friends you can trust. If your first true love is who i think it is he misses you more than you can imagine but use alchol to suppress it. good write kid keep it up i might not see you again but your writes are always inspiring to me esp when i go back to iraq. Thanks for the hope later kid. |
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Re: Painfull Sweey Goodbye
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 11:48:31 PM AEST
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wow such a powerful and emotional piece .
hope your ok?
ever need to talk i am just a pm away.
take care |
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