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Letter to compass
Contributed by
an3n
on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 04:23:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Letter to compass
If there's a border between a tree and a sky
then i dont know where it is
i dont know which branch it will break
or how much weight it can take
i want you to tell me where im at
If there's such a thing as walking on the sea
then i dont know how much faith you must carry inside
or how much hope and patience you'll need to succeed
i just feel i keep sinking as the days go by
i just want you to tell me where im at
If there's love between me and you
then i feel completely like a Jew
no borders,no land left to stand
is that my country, or just a belief that i have
Please, would you just tell me
where
i
am
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an3n
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2006-11-19 04:23:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Letter to compass
(User Rating: 1 ) by SaraSS on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 11:33:31 PM AEST (User
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It has a truly interesting emotion conveyed. I only wished that you hadn't done a rhyming poem because it really interrupted the flow and confused some of the meaning. |
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