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In All Her Glory
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 09:52:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A chopped up remnant of a memory
buried hastily in tragedy
Hazy in detail, yet still reliable
assuming the sealed lips are still pliable
Tossed and turned in sodden earth
gory remains of lifes' afterbirth
Flanked with a shield of utter contempt
fistfuls of dirt reveal a dogged attempt
Worms bore through the bony crevice of your mind
reluctantly they starve, when there's nothing to find
Wisps of secrets spill out, into the crisp, autumn air
unsheathed by your lips; they beg, if not dare...
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2006-11-18 21:52:33]
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 07:14:25 PM AEST
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Damn girl! This is serious stuff!
I missed your work hun. This piece is a stunning
example of just why. Brilliant, scorpy.
The metaphors are amazing and the sheer power
of this work drives through me like a lightning bolt.
Perfection~
~Breezy |
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 01:57:08 PM AEST
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Great write, Scorp. I've missed you and you're wonderful writings. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by wizard on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 11:54:17 PM AEST
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hey scorp..(welcome back...again!)
this was a great post, it stirs a lot of emotion... hope it was healing for you to write this.
wiz |
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by Jyssvw on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 03:50:18 PM AEST
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Wow…I must say…your work drastically improves as you keep writing…this was flawless…it was intense…it was just perfect…everything we all aspire to contain when we write.
My favorite lines…
“Hazy in detail, yet still reliable
assuming the sealed lips are still pliable”
You are a true talent
Your fan
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 06:52:40 AM AEST
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Scorpy~
I have missed you and your remarkable poetry so much my dear friend. Big *hugs* from Sue who is delighted to see a new post from Scorpy~ I have, but one word for this extraordinary masterpiece,
~*FLAWLESS*~
Great to see you back girl~
much love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 07:47:52 PM AEST
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Nice to have you back and writing, been a long while hasn't it? Certainly haven't lost your talent though. It's interesting, I've always liked how you use so many metaphors, and it's no different here. I've said this before, your writes make people think, you're not handed the story but once you get the outline, and it's core, it's relatable, and it pieces itself together perfectly - if any of that makes sense lol. Very nice scorpz, glad to have you back, hopefully they'll be more writes too.
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 08:19:03 PM AEST
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As, I only just discovered you, I can't join in all the, 'glad to see ya' back', but, I can certainly say, I'm immensely enjoying my first forays in getting to know your work! And, found this particularly lyrical...
" Wisps of secrets spill out, into the crisp, autumn air
unsheathed by your lips; they beg, if not dare..."
BigLoveMuchPeace
~me
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Re: In All Her Glory
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd August 2013 @ 12:56:26 AM AEST
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| Noooo, I don't dare. wow, yeah, detailed imagery. I could really see this one! |
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