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Hate
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 09:51:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The unspoken words, the things left unsaid
No chance to settle, our friendship is dead
Feeling betrayed, too angry for tears
Let tensions build for too many years
Most of life is settled, but there is no end
To the hurt that I'm feeling, so now I will send
A last message to you, of the pain in my heart
And the hate I'm now feeling, which will eventually part
I was there when you needed me, and neglected my life
When I needed you most, I was cut by a knife
I made the mistake of getting too involved
In your dramas and traumas that your life did revolve
My life was all ****** up, a long time spent in reflection
But I spent too much time looking to you for direction
Became too reliant and needy on the **** that weren't friends
At this age I should know better on who I should depend
Not once did you tell me, not once did you say
I have my own problems, please come back another day
So you waited 3 years to tell me your pain
Waited till I was at my weakest point, and THEN you did complain
Became the scapegoat for your own ****** up existence
Not even a chance to resolve a perceived simple difference
While my life fell apart, I was wrong to believe
That you cared at all, that your friendship would relieve
the depression, the sadness, the darkness that swallowed
I looked up to you, and your friendship I followed
When the end finally happened, and I took a look around
I stared alone into the sadness, and you were nowhere to be found
I only realized, when it came to the end
I set myself up to be hurt, cause you weren't a real friend
In the 2 months that have passed, I finally can see
That it all was a lie that you'd be there for me
For most my life I've made mistakes in choosing my close friends
But in all this ugly, rediscovered the core, on which I can depend
By choosing the wrong friends, I helped seal my fate
…and all I'm left with is this venomous hate
That I pass on to paper, so I can let go
A last time to be honest, so these things you should know
Copyright ©
darkscorpio
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2006-11-18 09:51:28]
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Re: Hate
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 10:24:42 AM AEST
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| the anger, hate, and pain is so brilliantly expressed in this. great job. |
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Re: Hate
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by kalbime_aldin on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 10:34:59 AM AEST
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| wow thats all i can say its really good i love it and so true Nikki |
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Re: Hate
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 03:24:40 PM AEST
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| A really good expression of hate and anger. So far today that's all I've read. Guess it's the season for it. |
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