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Longing to be a Legend III
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 05:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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~
Whistling into the darkening twilight~
to dispel the unsettling silence
The boys tune was cut short, caught in his throat~
against which now lay the promise of violence...
The hot rotten breath so close to his ear~
reeked of spirits so strong, his eyes watered
And when down his leg fears self had escaped~
bright with shame his face grew even hotter...
~
To be continued...
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2006-11-17 17:32:58]
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Re: Longing to be a Legend III
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by doug on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 05:58:18 PM AEST
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I am enjoying it so far. I'll keep an eye
out for the rest. Hope to see it soon.
truly , doug |
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Re: Longing to be a Legend III
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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me 3
I do question is this a memory coming back to you in pieces?
Good jub
Here's to clear thinking and total recall...
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Longing to be a Legend III
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:09:35 PM AEST
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Just a little niblet here, Kerry. To be so scared you pee yourself, damn that's scared. What a rotten predicament the young man is in now. Your story writing skills are very impressive.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Longing to be a Legend III
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:36:16 PM AEST
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Count on me 2 be at the continuance. A beautiful and perfect ending . . .
Ben |
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