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Besides
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 10:46:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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' Tis sound advice, I kid you not
To drink of life while it's still hot
Sufficient time when you are old
To safely sup when it is cold.
Don't be afraid to feel the burn
The pain will only help you learn
Besides, a lack of scars wont save
From chill and dampness of the grave.
Now if you follow my advice
The way won't always be so nice
There's rocky paths that you must climb
But really, I wouldn't give a dime
To live and never see the sights
From stony ledge or mountain heights
While fear dictates what I will do
Besides, you're gonna love the view.
Go live your life full speed ahead
God won't object or strike you dead
He gave you freedom of the will..
And 80 some odd years to kill
So take a chance, run the race
With but a little faster pace
It's even money you might win...
Besides, the running keeps you thin !
L. Carling c2006
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Rakerman1999
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Re: Besides
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 12:25:14 PM AEST
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Larry,
I loved this, Your right life needs to be lived not wasted on the things that dont really matter. Ahhhh maybe I will go race a car ROFLMAO havent done those things in a long time.
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Re: Besides
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 03:10:45 PM AEST
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very powerful and true write.. it was very wise indeed!! the flow and the power in the words are just incredible .. thanks for sharing .and great job
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Re: Besides
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 03:49:51 PM AEST
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Indeed they are wise words my friend. My motto is, "Life life to the max" Kick back,enjoy life and take it easy only then will you see the true beauty in everything that exists~
A wonderful write dearest Larry. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks so much for posting it.
Take care my friend,
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Besides
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by Spike on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 10:40:24 PM AEST
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Tongue in cheek and hand on heart, Larry? Your life sentiments sans gravitas but no less serious, resonate across the hemispheres. Such a descriptive yet smooth construction, and a wonderful triple rhyme scheme. I guess we were given this body to wear out, not wear in, and the chance to be thin again....well I'm hooked!
S |
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Re: Besides
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 07:39:23 PM AEST
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Hey there Larry I haven't been on here in ages and after reading this it made me realize just how much I missed your writings. This was so beautifully sad, but at the same time triumphant and to top it off it was written with poetic skill that most can only dream of.
Anyway if you want to e-mail me or send me some poems you've written then my e-mail is still the same bobothepimpclown@hotmail.com.
Hope to hear from ya soon!
Peace,
Joel |
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Re: Besides
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 08:16:29 PM AEST
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Toche"...wise words indeed good sir!!!
This piece has a wonderful rhythmn and flow to it as well!! |
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Re: Besides
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by ever1der on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 07:45:07 PM AEST
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something to think about; like I don' t have enough!!! why 80..
is this for someone that's only 20? It has to be..add 80 to my age and...well, we won't go there. This was great...thanks. |
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Re: Besides
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by Clarity_Rising on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 05:57:01 PM AEST
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| This is very sound advice you give to your reader. I like your realistic attitude in this poem, not painting the picture of life as always filled with love and daisies. Very eloquently done! |
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Re: Besides
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:52:06 PM AEST
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great advice:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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