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Letter to God
Contributed by
CDG
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Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 06:06:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Dear God,
Alright, we've had some problems
sometimes in the past but were usually cool
though i won't say a blast
I don't call on you
unless need becomes dire
and you don't throw stuff at me
like tornado and fire
But recently
You've been having some fun
With a good friend of mine
and now it's time to be done
She's been through enough
You've almost broken her mind
And all this from a God
who's supposed to be kind?
So lay off of her
pick on someone ele instead
don't you think it's enough
that her grandmother's dead?
So stop screwing with her
and with those about whom i care
and if you don't stop...
Don't make me come up there!
Copyright ©
CDG
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2006-11-17 06:06:07]
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Re: Letter to God
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 07:20:31 AM AEST
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Hard to understand why things are ordained to happen as they do isn't it?
I hope your friends luck changes for the better.
I got a good chuckle from your last line ;)
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Letter to God
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by LetTheSunComeUp on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 03:40:48 PM AEST
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I liked this one. The last few lines made me laugh.
Sometimes it seems unfair the burdens that some people have to carry. It’s something I have a hard time understanding myself. Anyway, this was well written and I enjoyed reading it.
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