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Fascination
Contributed by
lovestruck
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Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 05:19:22 PM in AEST
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The child who plays with fire,
always gets burned.
but the fascination persists,
again and again it licks at their fingers,
and then it bites,
leaves its mark, on body and mind
fascination suppressed, intrest gone
lesson learned
but not for long
memory fades, and body heals
fascination grows, intrest builds
the child plays with fire
they are cautious-at first,
but they always loose control
fire sits, biding its time
for when gaurds are let down,
and carelessness sets in
time is now, it strikes, hard and fast
chared remains leave a crippling effect
daily reminder of what should have been learned
the child won't forget this time
they wont play that game again
they're done, fascination is dead
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2006-11-16 17:19:22]
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Re: Fascination
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by Chamaron on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 11:45:04 PM AEST
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| Excellent message in this one. We always tend to be fascinated by what isn't good for us. Good job! |
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Re: Fascination
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by sometime_around_midnight on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 09:51:40 AM AEST
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| you really did an awesome job painting a story here with a woderful underlying message. it was beautiful thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Fascination
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by HidayahIsmawi on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 01:03:30 AM AEST
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| Nice. Good lessons to be learned. Firstly, never play with fire! :) |
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Re: Fascination
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by SaraSS on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 10:28:25 AM AEST
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| Good use of life long lessons! It's great! |
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