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Follow The White Lines
Contributed by
LadyStrdust
on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 04:35:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Embrace the madness
Repress the sane
Tilt your head back
And drink the rain
Allow yourself
To experience
The undiluted pain
Then at least this trip
Was not in vain
Chemical confusion
A distortion of the mind
Indulge in my elusion
Follow the white lines
Let it explore you
There is no need for fear
Witness my enjoyment
Follow by example my dear
Imagine its whisky
And binge until it burns
It's not nearly as risky
If you try then you will learn
Religiously devoted
Adaptable to lies
Subconscious acceptance
Nothing matters
When you can fly
Tiny grains of crystal
That shine away the hurt
I was rich with all the diamonds
But they touched me
And it burnt
Copyright ©
LadyStrdust
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2006-11-16 16:35:04]
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Re: Follow The White Lines
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 05:09:30 PM AEST
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Been there...Nicely written!!! But the fact of the matter is with 2 major strokes under my belt at the ripe old age of 36, I was left with an inability to physically ply pen to paper & it broke my heart. I can only hope you don't ride the rails as long as I did. If you read my, "Altered States Freedom" you'll know I'm not coming from a preachy, born again place but rather one of empathy. Good Job!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Follow The White Lines
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 12:05:53 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Follow The White Lines
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 08:56:14 PM AEST
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Another richly textured ripple near three sheets in the wind...
Lady the above comment from MisfitMe is a real wonderful sharing heart to heart. I admit a little crush and we have had a bit of a tryst with each others work And I must admit I read her comment to you and was a bit floored as i did not know of this occurance and the sharing of it was so freely given in response to the depth of your work.
Just an incredible benefit to connecting here at the YPDC... I hope you enjoy.
Peace
Yang
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Re: Follow The White Lines
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 04:16:37 PM AEST
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| I'm so glad you're a talented writer but also a very wise lady for your young years, you can write about anything Ladystrdust with such depth and yet you really are so rooted and down to earth! Well done again, I'm so proud of you. |
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Re: Follow The White Lines
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 04:41:26 PM AEST
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| Another brilliant poem exceptional writing from as Manda said someone so young well done hope to read more from your work.. ((((hugs))))) xxx |
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Re: Follow The White Lines
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by laydeeluck on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 01:51:58 PM AEST
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| realtiy bites and this time you bit it good with the realism you have shown...props |
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Re: Follow The White Lines
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by girlg0newrong on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:11:51 AM AEST
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| So very good. So very true. Ahh, memories... |
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