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Breakdown
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 09:39:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Screeching halt, hit the brakes,
Doesn’t matter, hindrance too late.
Don’t want to crash into a wall,
Instead you scoot me off a cliff, painful fall.
Held it in, I held it in for you,
Don’t care, the fact I sacrifice isn’t true.
Downward spiral, I told you no,
You counted to three with glee, shouted 'go.’
Am I a person? Don’t care.
Depression so great, with me you’ll share.
Here comes breakdown number two,
Stabbed in the heart, cut right through.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
... [
2006-11-15 21:39:39]
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Re: Breakdown
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 12:03:04 AM AEST
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awesome. it had a great flow, i'm not sure how you wanted it read, since a lot of poems are meant to read differently, but for me this one went very fast, practically rhythmetic. i loved it, gonna have to read more.
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Re: Breakdown
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 04:35:08 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. This is a great poem. keep writing! |
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