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Melt Me Down
Contributed by
bopeep
on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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Melt me down and pour me out
Around your temple I'll wander about.
A ritual you perform so well.
So like you to kiss and tell.
With your lips you caress my walls.
As every brick between us falls.
Penetrate through my skin.
An ecstasy releasing us from sin.
Melt me down and pour me out.
Make me moan, make me shout.
Make me want you each and every night,
As I lay alone in my under the moon's light.
In the darkness your name I moan.
For this momment my body you own.
The tension has reached its peak.
Another night of pleasure we will seek.
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bopeep
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2003-02-17 18:40:00]
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Re: Melt Me Down
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 07:17:08 PM AEST
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Me likey! ;)
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Re: Melt Me Down
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:13:25 PM AEST
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i simply love it! i adore you as a writer.
the rhyme and rhythm was impeccable - not forced or sacrificing the message or beauty of the poem
truly wonderful.
- Bethani - |
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