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Mistress & Slave
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 04:03:33 PM in AEST
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Ribbons of moonlight~
stream through the dark of night
Illuminating the swirling mists...
Runaways take flight~
at the stroke of midnight
Each other unable to resist...
Both willing to chance~
all risked by romance
Should any find out & raise alarm...
After one last dance~
neither dare to back glance
Tempted to stay in each others arms...
Secret vows taken~
that others have named, "sin"
For law considers their love a crime...
When day awakens~
passions again forsaken
As apart they must put in their time...
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MisfitMe
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Re: Mistress & Slave
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by SoUR_GuRL67 on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 06:34:59 PM AEST
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Nice...
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Re: Mistress & Slave
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 10:10:54 PM AEST
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A feast for the hungry...
A very racy take on the double income work a day couple.
Your opening stanza is delicious a poetic christmas morning:
"Ribbons of moonlight~
stream through the dark of night
Illuminating the swirling mists..."
From green otherside grass comes a really a well contained context as everyday apart, couples are tempted; many of whom create whole industries right there (as your preface suggests) but you reel it in to:
"Secret vows taken~..."
till
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"..passions again forsaken..."
This piece reveals a taste of the gravity of modern unions. Great Job!
Peace
AJ
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Re: Mistress & Slave
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 12:54:51 AM AEST
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Oooo I liked this tasty little treasure. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Mistress & Slave
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 06:31:30 AM AEST
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Re: Mistress & Slave
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:11:59 AM AEST
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I needed to read some serious poetry this is deep and sensitive and between the lines a bit hazey but then my eye sight is rather good. a beautiful writting as is all your poetry. seems it comes from a distant heart but sincere one at that. take care.
Ben |
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