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My Pain
Contributed by
Dandy
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Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:13:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My pain is my pain is my pain,
They can never understand my agony,
Collective blindness of everyone around,
No real comfort, just their passing empathy,
My pain is my pain is my pain,
True isolation, incarcerated in this psychic cell,
Kept alive by odd glimpses of hope,
But it fades to the hopelessness I know too well,
My pain is my pain is my pain,
Reaching out with clumsy words, I try,
Failing once again, myself and others,
My words lose meaning then fade and die,
My pain is my pain is my pain,
I’m no fool; much rain wears away the stone,
Everything is temporary; it’s only a matter of time,
So there’s no surprise that my pain is my pain alone.
Copyright ©
Dandy
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2006-11-15 11:13:30]
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Re: My Pain
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by spiritwind on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:27:55 PM AEST
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much rain wears away the stone, that is profound.
Splendid poem and so raw with emotion.
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Re: My Pain
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:41:49 PM AEST
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This was amazing... I loved this.. I liked how you kept using the first line in every stanza... This was a really well written poem...
Take care
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Re: My Pain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 05:14:36 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. Good job! |
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