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Contributed by
light_to_your_darkness
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Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:02:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The world is completely over-rated
these tears are becoming the past
every fleeting second that passes
each breath I wish were the last
This fire has gotten confuzzled
somehow wishing to start at the top
the moment the last blade has fallen
the last beat before my heart stops
The look in your eyes will be perfect
the moment realization kicks in
I'll know it, for I will be watching
enjoying the guilt for you sin
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2006-11-15 11:02:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Opinions
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:02:58 PM AEST (User
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Lets hope that is so...
I like the piece it expresses pain and loss and imagines a remedy which in itself helps the healing process.
Perhaps as a ghost there would be a lot of other fun things to do....Not that wouldn't be kewl
Here is to good wishes and sweet dreams
Peace
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