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Movie Perfect Kiss
Contributed by
MandiLee
on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 08:48:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I just met you,
But everytime I hear your name,
Or hear your voice
I can feel a smile forming
on my face.
I can't get enough of you
I want you in my arms holding me tight
then moving in for the
Movie perfect kiss.
In the middle of
A crowded room
But all that exist
In that moment
is me, you, and a kiss.
Copyright ©
MandiLee
... [
2006-11-14 20:48:32]
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Re: Movie Perfect Kiss
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 09:22:59 PM AEST
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| its cute and sweet, but it doesnt quite capture the emotion of love. Like i SEE the love but i can't FEEL the love. Capture that emotion! show us all how much Austin really means to you!
good! now make it a great!
ashley :-) |
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Re: Movie Perfect Kiss
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by ruby_dreamer on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 02:11:11 AM AEST
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| Describe to me a movie kiss...what makes it that perfect, that surreal? A very sweet poem, but I can see it more as a paragraph in a love letter than a poem trying to capture the essence of love. But I like it! ^^ |
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Re: Movie Perfect Kiss
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 02:09:41 PM AEST
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Mandi-
Im glad to see that you have someone in your life that means so much to you. You really show it in this poem, its very touching and a powerful write.
Eddie Dean |
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