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Calling confusion a state of mind
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:36:59 PM in AEST
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Freeing inside the illusion thats at stake
hearing deep echos that guide me to your fate
eye lids heavy a notion im not real
hearing voices that give a endless spiel
Deep down inside a feeling that i am not allowed to wake
daydreaming in this vibrant apocalyptic state
causing confusion to swarm in my deadly wake
never allowed to feel the chains break
Guided by pleasure and the sceant of demise
looking at the heavens for the hole in the sky
daydreaming walking in this cloud of regreat
waiting for the alarm to make me forget
Deep down inside a feeling that i am not allowed to wake
daydreaming in this vibrant apocalyptic state
causing confusion to swarm in my deadly wake
never allowed to feel the chains break
Calling confusion a state of mind
feeling its poision seep threw my mind
dripping revulsion at all that i say
daydreaming nightmares are all my mind plays
deep down inside a feeling of loss
waking is harder when you feel lost
dragging chains thinking your free
lost in a plague they wont let me be
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Re: Calling confusion a state of mind
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:39:27 PM AEST
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| wow. thought provoking and so full of emotion. an amazing write. thanks for posting it. |
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Re: Calling confusion a state of mind
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:48:03 PM AEST
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Dark & intense, but I guess that's why we're writers. Deep write!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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